Top Ten... Crit Feedback

The first comments I had back from Alice and Starkie, were the suitability of my title as it had become apparent that my title was quite misleading... As the way I am working is very glitzy and glamourous, and not all female icons fit this e.g. Margaret Thatcher, so I must change my title to be more appropriate.

- Top Ten Female Icons of Hollywood...?

The target audience is quite broad too, I need to focus more on this, and from this point on, I am directing this programme at the younger generation of females.